Saturday, March 15, 2008

Chapter 2

The Hall Way


Billy started feeling a sharp pain in both of his legs. Billy feel onto the ground, face first into a dark, mucky, and thick liquid. Billy, eyes burning from the mysterious liquid, pulls his face out of the small puddle and starts rubbing his eyes. The burning stops, the sharp pain in his legs stop. Billy looks down to see that his legs and feet were both intact. Billy stands up and looks around, the place was not the same place he was running.



"Where the hell am I" Billy whispered. "Am I dead?"



As Billy looked around he noticed that he could hear a small voice talking to him, but he couldn't understand the little voice in his ear. Billy was in a dark hallway, he could see torches lighting up the long, dark, and gloomy hallway. The hall way was flooded with the smell of blood. Billy looked to his left and saw a door. As Billy walked closer to the door he saw that blood was cascading from the top all the way to the floor. Is this what I fell into? Billy thought. Billy looked at the handle of the blood flowing door and realized that the handle was an eyeball that was blinking and looking right at him. Billy could feel a some very cold wind piercing the back of his bare neck.
Billy looked over his shoulder to find emptiness in the air. He starts walking down the the dark hall way and finds more doors and more eyes glaring at him. Billy starts to panic, Billy starts to run as fast as he can down the dark hallway. Billy doesn't know what he is going to find when he gets to the end of the hallway, but he doesn't care. anything would be better than what he was seeing now, or so he thought.





Billy running as hard as he could, still could see the many doors that he was pasting were flowing dark red blood just as much as the first door he encountered. Billy starts to slow down after running for what seemed like hours he stopped to get some air, stale air, but air none the less. Billy hears a distant growling in the darkness ahead. Straining his eyes to try to make out the shadowy figure make was apparently making the noise, Billy decided to run in the opposite direction. By the time Billy had turned around something hard and jagged hit him like a truck. feeling that one or more of his ribs were broken he didn't want to stay on the floor long. when Billy stood up to see what had hit him he was starring at a green rocky looking chest.





"oh fu.." Billy said right as a giant claw dug into his side. The claws which were sharper than blades cut through Billy's skin like a a razor sharp knife cuts through paper. Billy screaming in pain looks up to see the thing that is hurting him and what he sees is nothing that he has ever comprehend.



This monster was about 8 feet tall, with green rocky like skin. The monster feet are larger then one foot wide and two feet long, the feet are gigantic. The monster has three eyes that glow gold and 50 giant teeth that look to be stained blood red with small bit of what looks to be flesh still stuck from his last meal. As the monster screams Billy almost passes out from the rancid smell that seems to shot out like when shake a can of coke up and open it right away. The monster slams Billy hard onto the ground.



Laying there Billy can feel anything in his body am I dead. Billy thought in his head.

"Billy!! Billy!! wake the hell up"

2 comments:

The Anonymous Writer said...

I really enjoyed reading your story it is very entertaining and suspenseful you have great visuals in your story and I can't wait to read the third chapter keep it up great writing!

valentino said...

thank you i really enjoy thinking of this story i hope you continue to enjoy reading it